cherry pick from monero-project#2384

plowsof · Jan 16, 2025 · ebea500 · ebea500
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@@ -146,8 +146,8 @@ merchants:
   useit: "Merchants that accept Monero"
   use: Over the years, merchants of all kinds have come to value the financial privacy that Monero brings. In fact, merchant adoption is continuously rising.
   dirdescr: "If you are looking for places to spend your Monero, the directories below have some options. Please remember to do your own research before trusting them with your money:"
-  descrp2p: The best way to exchange Monero for other currencies (or the other way round) is using P2P exchanges, because they allow traders to directly interact with each other, without the need of trusted third parties (except maybe for providing an escrow service). These exchanges are more private than their centralized counterparts and allow people to be in complete control of their coins if they are non-custodial, but they usually have less volume than 'traditional' exchanges. In the section below, we offer a list of P2P exchanges that support Monero.
-  swapsdescr: A new exciting way to exchange Monero is Atomic Swaps, which <a href="https://www.getmonero.org/2021/08/20/atomic-swaps.html">we announced</a> on August 2021. Atomic Swaps are a completely decentralized way to swap Bitcoin <-> Monero (more info in the blog post).
+  descrp2p: A great way to exchange Monero for other currencies is to use a Peer to Peer [P2P] exchange. P2P exchanges allow traders to directly interact with one another, and (in some cases) without the need of trusted third party (except for providing an escrow service). These exchanges are typically more private than their centralized and/or custodial counterparts.
+  swapsdescr: A trustless method to exchange Monero with other cryptocurrencies is to use Atomic Swaps, which [we wrote about](https://www.getmonero.org/2021/08/20/atomic-swaps.html) in August 2021. Atomic Swaps are a completely trustless way to swap Cryptocurrencies <-> Monero (more info in the blog post)
   bisqdescr: Decentralized P2P exchange based on Bitcoin and Tor.
   cardfoss: "Open source:"
   cardkyc: "<b>No KYC</b> (Know Your Customer):"