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diff --git a/source/educators/how-tos/advanced_features/add_cohorts.rst b/source/educators/how-tos/advanced_features/add_cohorts.rst
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ applicable, and specifying the assignment method for each cohort.
    your course that is automatically assigned. If you have not created at
    least one automated assignment cohort in the course by the time that the
    first learner accesses your course content or a divided discussion topic,
-   Open edX creates a default cohort to which learners are automatically assigned.
+   the platform creates a default cohort in your course to which learners are automatically assigned.
 
 For details about adding learners to a cohort by uploading a .csv file, see
 :ref:`Assign Learners to Cohort Groups by uploading CSV`.

diff --git a/source/educators/how-tos/advanced_features/assign_learners_cohort_csv.rst b/source/educators/how-tos/advanced_features/assign_learners_cohort_csv.rst
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Assign Learners to Cohorts by Uploading a .csv File
 Uploading a .csv file containing a list of learners and the cohorts that you
 want to assign them to is another way of assigning learners to cohorts
 manually. For details about the other manual assignment method, see
-:ref:`Assign Learners to Cohorts Manually`.¿
+:ref:`Assign Learners to Cohorts Manually`.
 
 Any assignments to cohorts that you specify in the .csv files you upload will
 overwrite or change existing cohort assignments. The configuration of your

diff --git a/source/educators/how-tos/advanced_features/chage_learner_cohort_assignment.rst b/source/educators/how-tos/advanced_features/chage_learner_cohort_assignment.rst
@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@ Change Learner Cohort Assignments
 After your course starts and learners begin to contribute to the course
 discussion, each post that they add is visible either to everyone or to the
 members of a single cohort. When you change the cohort that a learner is
-assigned to, there are three results.
+assigned to, the following occur:
 
 * The learner continues to see the posts that are visible to everyone.
 
-* The learner sees the posts that are visible to his new cohort.
+* The learner now sees the posts that are visible to their new cohort.
 
-* The learner no longer sees the posts that are visible only to his original
+* The learner no longer sees the posts that are visible only to their original
   cohort.
 
 The visibility of a post and its responses and comments does not change, even

diff --git a/source/educators/how-tos/advanced_features/change_assignment_method_cohort.rst b/source/educators/how-tos/advanced_features/change_assignment_method_cohort.rst
@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ Learners to Cohorts` and :ref:`Altering Cohort Configuration`.
 .. note:: When your course starts, you must have at least one cohort in your
    course that has automatic assignment. If you have not created at least one
    automated assignment cohort in the course by the time that the first learner
-   accesses your course content, Open edX creates a default cohort to which learners
-   are automatically assigned. If the :ref:`default group<Default Cohort
+   accesses your course content, a default cohort to which learners
+   are automatically assigned will be created in your course. If the :ref:`default group<Default Cohort
    Group>` is the only automated assignment cohort in your course, you cannot
    change its assignment method to **Manual**.
 

diff --git a/source/educators/how-tos/course_development/add_course_live.rst b/source/educators/how-tos/course_development/add_course_live.rst
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Once successfully enabled, the LTI provider will be accessible in
 Provider specific configuration
 ********************************
 
-At present, Open edX supports following video conferencing LTI provider:
+At present, the Open edX platform supports following video conferencing LTI provider:
 1.  Zoom
 2.  Big Blue button
 
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ To generate LTI credentials in LTI pro app:
 
    a. Add "instructor_email" to `Email or Employee Unique ID Attribute Name` setting.
 
-   b. Add the link to your Open edX instance to the `Approved Domains` setting.
+   b. Add the link to your Open edX instance's Learning MFE (for example, `learning.myinstance.com` - see the URL when you view your course) to the `Approved Domains` setting.
 
 
 To configure Zoom, navigate to Live app configurations
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ Once successfully enabled, Zoom will be accessible in "Live" tab in course navig
    :alt: Screenshot of Zoom rendered in Live tab in course navigation
 
 
-Big Blue Button Setup
+Big Blue Button setup
 ======================
 
 `Big blue button <https://bigbluebutton.org/>`_ can be used to create virtual classrooms