Merge pull request #144 from estark37/main

SHA: 7be5a64
Reason: push, by letitz

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index.html

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    <h1>Private Network Access</h1>
-   <p id="w3c-state"><a href="https://www.w3.org/standards/types#CG-DRAFT">Draft Community Group Report</a>, <time class="dt-updated" datetime="2024-04-29">29 April 2024</time></p>
+   <p id="w3c-state"><a href="https://www.w3.org/standards/types#CG-DRAFT">Draft Community Group Report</a>, <time class="dt-updated" datetime="2024-09-26">26 September 2024</time></p>
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      <dt>This version:
@@ -1125,8 +1125,9 @@ <h3 class="heading settled" data-level="2.2" id="private-network-request-heading
     <p>This approach has some flaws:</p>
     <ul>
      <li data-md>
-      <p>false positives: an intranet server with a <a data-link-type="dfn" href="#public-address" id="ref-for-public-address③">public address</a> might be able
-to directy issue requests to another server on the same intranet with a <a data-link-type="dfn" href="#private-address" id="ref-for-private-address①">private address</a>.</p>
+      <p>false positives: an intranet server with a <a data-link-type="dfn" href="#public-address" id="ref-for-public-address③">public address</a> might not be
+able to directy issue requests to another server on the same intranet with
+a <a data-link-type="dfn" href="#private-address" id="ref-for-private-address①">private address</a>.</p>
      <li data-md>
       <p>false negatives: a client connected to two different <a data-link-type="dfn" href="#ip-address-space-private" id="ref-for-ip-address-space-private①⑤">private</a> networks, say a home network and a VPN, might
 allow a website served from the VPN to access devices on the home network.