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content/embeds/rc-create-db-first-steps.md

@@ -17,6 +17,6 @@ To create a database in your Redis Cloud account:
     - **Cache**: Stores short-term or volatile data. Can be used for session management, semantic cache, session store, and other uses where data is short-lived.
     - **Database**: Stores durable and consistent data. Can be used for document databases, feature storage, gaming leaderboards, durable caches, and other uses where your data needs to be highly available and persistent.
     - **Vector search**: Manages and manipulates vector data. Can be used for Generative AI, recommendation systems, visual search, and other uses where you can search and query your data.
-    - **Custom**: If your Redis use case doesn't match any of the other use cases, you can choose this option to choose all of your settings.
+    - **Custom**: If your Redis use case doesn't match any of the other use cases, you can choose this option to customize all of your settings.
 
     Select the use case that best matches your Redis use case. You can always change the settings later. See [Use case settings](#use-case-settings) to view the settings for each use case.

content/rc/databases/configuration/clustering.md

@@ -166,11 +166,11 @@ their order to suit your application's requirements.
 
 ## Dataset size
 
-The dataset size represents the maximum amount of memory for the database, which includes data values, keys, module data, and overhead for specific features.  High availability features, such as replication and Active-Active, dramatically increase memory consumption.  
+The dataset size represents the maximum amount of memory for the database, which includes data values, keys, module data, and overhead for specific features.  High availability features, such as replication and Active-Active,  increase memory consumption.  
 
 Here are some general guidelines:
 
-- Memory limit represents an upper limit.  You cannot store more data than the memory limit.  Depending on your other selections, available memory for data may be much less than expected.
+- Memory limit represents an upper limit.  You cannot store more data than the memory limit.  Depending on your other selections, available memory for data may be less than expected.
 
 - [Replication](HA LINK) doubles memory consumption; that is, 512MB of data requires at least 1GB of memory limit when replication is enabled. This affects both Redis Cloud Pro and Redis Cloud Essentials. For example, if you subscribe to a 1 GB Essentials plan, Redis will allocate 512 MB for your dataset and the other 512 MB for replication.
 

content/rc/databases/create-database/create-essentials-database.md

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ This guide shows how to create an Essentials database.
 - If you already have a Pro subscription and want to add a database to it, see [Create a Pro database in an existing subscription]({{<relref "/rc/databases/create-database/create-pro-database-existing">}}).
     {{< /note >}}
 
-    Once you select **Essentials**, the rest of the database details will appear.
+    After you select **Essentials**, the rest of the database details will appear.
 
     {{<image filename="images/rc/create-database-essentials-cloud-vendor.png" alt="The database name, cloud vendor, region, and type settings.">}}{{< /image >}}
 
@@ -39,7 +39,6 @@ This guide shows how to create an Essentials database.
 
     {{<image filename="images/rc/create-database-essentials-durability.png" alt="The durability settings allow you to choose High availability and Data persistence.">}}{{< /image >}}
 
-    IMAGE HERE: durability settings panel
 
     Redis Cloud supports the following high availability settings:
 
@@ -57,7 +56,7 @@ This guide shows how to create an Essentials database.
 
     See [Data persistence]({{<relref "rc/databases/configuration/data-persistence">}}) for more information about these settings.
 
-    These settings may already be set based on the use case you selected. you can change them now if you like.
+    These settings may already be set based on the use case you selected. You can change them now if you like.
 
 1. Select the desired dataset size. To create a free database, select the 30 MB dataset size. You can only have one free database at a time.
 
@@ -71,7 +70,7 @@ This guide shows how to create an Essentials database.
 
 1. Select **Create database** or **Confirm & pay** to create your database.
 
-When you create your database, there's a brief pause while your request is processed and then you're taken to the **Database details** page.
+When you create your database, there's a brief pause while your request is processed and then the **Database details** page appears.
 
 
 ## Use case settings

content/rc/databases/create-database/create-pro-database-existing.md

@@ -20,17 +20,17 @@ This guide shows how to create a Pro database in an existing subscription.
 - If you'd rather create an Essentials database, see [Create an Essentials database]({{<relref "/rc/databases/create-database/create-essentials-database">}}).
     {{< /note >}}
 
-After you select **Pro** and then select your subscription from the list, you're taken to the **Create database** page. The **Create database** screen is divided into sections, each dedicated to a specific category of settings.
+After you select **Pro** and select your subscription from the list, the **Create database** page appears. The **Create database** screen is divided into sections, each dedicated to a specific category of settings.
 
-When you've configured your new database, use the **Activate database** button to create and activate it.
+When you've configured your new database, click the **Activate database** button to create and activate it.
 
 {{<image filename="images/rc/button-database-activate.png" alt="Use the Activate database button to create and activate your database." width="150px">}}{{< /image >}}
 
 ## General section
 
 The **General** section defines basic properties about your database.
 
-IMAGE HERE: general section
+<!---IMAGE HERE: general section-->
 
 The available settings vary according to your subscription plan:
 
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ The **Durability** section helps you keep your database (and your data) availabl
 | Setting name             | Description                                                                                                                                                                |
 |:-------------------------|:---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
 | **High availability**    | Replicates your data across multiple nodes, as allowed by your subscription plan                                                                                           |
-| **Data persistence**     | Defines whether (and how) data is saved to disk; [available options]({{< relref "/rc/databases/configuration/data-persistence.md" >}}) depend on your plan type            |
+| **Data persistence**     | Defines whether (and how) data is saved to disk; [available options]({{< relref "/rc/databases/configuration/data-persistence.md" >}}) depending on your plan type            |
 | **Data eviction policy** | Configures which [policy]({{< relref "/rc/databases/configuration/data-eviction-policies.md" >}}) is applied when your database reaches its memory limit              |
 | **Remote backup**        | When enabled, identifies a location and interval for [data backups]({{< relref "/rc/databases/back-up-data" >}}) |
 | **Active-Passive Redis** | When enabled, identifies a path to the linked database. See [Migrate data]({{<relref "/rc/databases/migrate-databases">}}) for more information.           |

content/rc/databases/create-database/create-pro-database-new.md

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ This guide shows how to create a Pro database with a new subscription.
     {{< /note >}}
 
 
-Once you select **Pro**, you need to: 
+After you select **Pro**, you need to: 
 
 1. Set up the deployment options, including cloud vendor details, high availability settings, and advanced options.
 
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ The **Setup** tab specifies general settings for your Redis deployment.
 
 {{<image filename="images/rc/subscription-new-flexible-tabs-setup.png" width="75%" alt="The Setup tab of the new Pro Database process." >}}{{< /image >}}
 
-The three sections to this tab:
+There are three sections on this tab:
 
 - [General settings](#general-settings) include the cloud provider details, the subscription name, and specific configuration options.
 - [Version](#version) lets you choose the Redis version of your databases.