"System Configuration" label & dynamic release string, "Why OpenIndiana and illumos?" paragraph #10
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pyhalov
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Dec 3, 2018
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@Mno-hime Can you find some native speaker to read out text? Also, what are we going to do with current translations? |
Added "motivational" paragraph on "why OpenIndiana and illumos" based on Aurélien's https://www.phoronix.com/forums/forum/software/oracle-solaris/1056346-openindiana-2018-10-released-with-mate-1-20-desktop-gcc-8-python-3-5-support?p=1056422#post1056422. For the rest it's mostly clarifications and better suited links to documentation.
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Email sent to -discuss about the English text. I also asked for other native language speakers' help. But I think we should ship the updated English text regardless the availability of updated translations, once the English text is deemed OK. |
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| <h2>Welcome to OpenIndiana Hipster!</h2> | ||
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| <p>OpenIndiana is an illumos based Unix-like distribution derived from OpenSolaris. | ||
| Constructed as a general purpose operating system with enterprise class features, OpenIndiana Hipster is developed by the community, and for the community.</p> | ||
| <p>OpenIndiana is an illumos based Unix distribution derived from OpenSolaris. |
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| <p>OpenIndiana is an illumos based Unix distribution derived from OpenSolaris. | |
| <p>OpenIndiana is an illumos-based Unix distribution derived from OpenSolaris. |
| <p>OpenIndiana is an illumos based Unix-like distribution derived from OpenSolaris. | ||
| Constructed as a general purpose operating system with enterprise class features, OpenIndiana Hipster is developed by the community, and for the community.</p> | ||
| <p>OpenIndiana is an illumos based Unix distribution derived from OpenSolaris. | ||
| Engineered as a general-purpose operating system with enterprise-class features, |
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| Engineered as a general-purpose operating system with enterprise-class features, | |
| Engineered as a general purpose operating system with enterprise-class features, |
| <p>OpenIndiana obtains its name from Project Indiana, an open source effort by Sun Microsystems (now Oracle Corporation) to produce OpenSolaris, a community developed Unix-like distribution based on Sun Solaris. | ||
| Project Indiana was led by Ian Murdock, founder of the Debian Linux Distribution.</p> | ||
| <p>OpenIndiana obtains its name from Project Indiana, an open source effort | ||
| by Sun Microsystems (now Oracle Corporation) to produce OpenSolaris, a community |
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| by Sun Microsystems (now Oracle Corporation) to produce OpenSolaris, a community | |
| by Sun Microsystems (now Oracle Corporation) to produce OpenSolaris, a community-developed |
| Project Indiana was led by Ian Murdock, founder of the Debian Linux Distribution.</p> | ||
| <p>OpenIndiana obtains its name from Project Indiana, an open source effort | ||
| by Sun Microsystems (now Oracle Corporation) to produce OpenSolaris, a community | ||
| developed Unix distribution based on Sun Solaris. Project Indiana was led by |
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| developed Unix distribution based on Sun Solaris. Project Indiana was led by | |
| Unix distribution based on Sun Solaris. Project Indiana was led by |
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| <td><a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ZFS">ZFS</a></td> | ||
| <td>File System and Volume Manager</td> | ||
| <td>Copy-on-write file system and logical volume manager with extensive data corruption protection, high storage capacities support, efficient data compression, snapshots, and more</td> |
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| <td>Copy-on-write file system and logical volume manager with extensive data corruption protection, high storage capacities support, efficient data compression, snapshots, and more</td> | |
| <td>Copy-on-write file system and logical volume manager with extensive data corruption protection, high storage capacity support, efficient data compression, snapshots, and more</td> |
| in Zones are updated as well, or, at minimum, are kept in a coherent state.</li><br> | ||
| <li>System utilities like <tt>pgrep</tt>, <tt>pkill</tt>, <tt>ps</tt>, <tt>ptree</tt>, <tt>svcprop</tt>, | ||
| and <tt>ipmon</tt> have <tt>-z</tt> option, which enables them to operate on a particular Zone without the need | ||
| to login to the Zone first.</li><br> |
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| to login to the Zone first.</li><br> | |
| to log in to the Zone first.</li><br> |
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| <a href="https://wiki.openindiana.org/oi/Release+Notes">https://wiki.openindiana.org/oi/Release+Notes</a> | ||
| <p>Considering the cross-pollination of technologies with FreeBSD and Linux, our code-base | ||
| had contributed in a notable extent to operating system's innovation. Hence we still strive |
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| had contributed in a notable extent to operating system's innovation. Hence we still strive | |
| has made significant contributions to operating system innovation. We continue to strive |
| Currently build servers, hosting and bandwidth is donated by EveryCity hosting in the UK.</p> | ||
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| <h2>Getting Involved</h2> | ||
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| <p>Our success as a distribution depends upon the success of our community, which is why we would like to invite all those interested in the future of OpenIndiana to participate and get involved!</p> | ||
| <p>Because our success as a operating system distribution depends upon the success of our community, |
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| <p>Because our success as a operating system distribution depends upon the success of our community, | |
| <p>Our success as an operating system distribution depends upon the success of our community. |
| Currently build servers, hosting and bandwidth is donated by EveryCity hosting in the UK.</p> | ||
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| <h2>Getting Involved</h2> | ||
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| <p>Our success as a distribution depends upon the success of our community, which is why we would like to invite all those interested in the future of OpenIndiana to participate and get involved!</p> | ||
| <p>Because our success as a operating system distribution depends upon the success of our community, | ||
| please, feel welcome in our mailing lists, IRC channels, and GitHub projects.</p> |
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| please, feel welcome in our mailing lists, IRC channels, and GitHub projects.</p> | |
| We want all contributors and users to feel welcome in our mailing lists, IRC channels, and GitHub projects.</p> |
| <li>For end users we have publicly available IPS repositories for updating your installation with the latest software and security fixes.</li> | ||
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| <p>Developers can instantly leverage <a href="https://app.vagrantup.com/openindiana/boxes/hipster">OpenIndiana Vagrant box</a> | ||
| on Linux, Microsoft Windows, and Apple macOS via VirtualBox.</p> |
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| on Linux, Microsoft Windows, and Apple macOS via VirtualBox.</p> | |
| on Linux, Microsoft Windows, and Apple macOS with VirtualBox.</p> |
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Paragraph based on @alarcher's Phoronix forum post.
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