First Example Project Guide #15
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| In this first example project, we'll start with the basics. The following topics will be covered: |
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This sentence implies that this project itself will be teaching users the following topics. My assumption is that this project will be utilizing and/or enforcing those topics, so the wording should be clearer to avoid that confusion.
| * :doc:`Section 2.1 - An Introduction to Tags </docs/basics-of-scripting/an-introduction-to-tags>` | ||
| * :doc:`Section 2.2 - The Basics of Denizen Commands </docs/basics-of-scripting/basics-of-denizen-commands>` | ||
| * :doc:`Section 2.7 - Your First World Script </docs/basics-of-scripting/your-first-world-script>` | ||
| * **[TODO: Add FOREACH section reference]** |
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You should probably add a couple more TODOs, particularly for advanced tag construction, debugging, and browsing the documentation (yes, I'm planning on adding a subsection for that under Section 1).
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| 1. First Steps |
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I'm a little unsure about this section name. Can it be a little more specific, or less general?
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Generally speaking, throughout the document there tends to be multiple places where there's a lot of emphasis text. I'd like for the emphasis text to be reserved for the more "critical" information that the user must absolutely pay attention to. |
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| This tutorial assumes our *Hub world* is in fact called ``Hub``. |
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This note might be a little out of place. It may be better to just mention in the paragraph at line 40 that this can be done in any world, but that you're using a world named "Hub" as an example world that the user may use.
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| Let's go ahead and specify ``diamond`` as the first argument of our give command. We don't have to worry about who to | ||
| give the diamond to, as the command will target the linked player by default. That is, the player that triggered the | ||
| event. The full command line will then be ``- give diamond``. |
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There shouldn't be a real need to say "the player that triggered the event" since that part would be covered in a section on how queues work.
Though that being said, that adds another thing to the list of concepts that the user should be familiar with before starting this project
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Hi. It's been two months. If there is no additional changes or replies within the next week, I will assume that this PR is no longer being maintained and I will close it. Thanks. |
Puts some basic concepts into practice, helping users create a simple halloween event for their server.