Minor clarity/org suggestions #1
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Replaced "surface" (jargon) -- also suggest replacing "amazing" with something more descriptive...what makes the DataRole content amazing? Revised the ordered list to sound more like steps than suggestions. Also removed item 5 from ordered list (not everyone will have a question, so it's not really step 5) Other minor changes to enhance voice and clarity.
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Replaced "surface" (jargon) -- also suggest replacing "amazing" with something more descriptive...what makes the DataRole content amazing?
Revised the ordered list to sound more like steps than suggestions. Also removed item 5 from ordered list (not everyone will have a question, so it's not really step 5)
Other minor changes to enhance voice and clarity.