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Kunzite: G Quinn #109

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Overall great job! The code was well-structured and follows good variable naming conventions. I'd suggest a little caution with syntax to make sure Python conventions are followed and consider refactoring opportunities whenever they might come up.

@@ -1,11 +1,127 @@
import random

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Good idea to add a line break between the imports and functions in a file like this.

def draw_letters():
pass
letters =[]
LETTER_POOL = {

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This dictionary could be moved outside this function into the main scope of the module so that draw_letters doesn't need to recreate this dictionary every time the function is run.

letter = random.choice(list(LETTER_POOL))
if LETTER_POOL[letter] > 0:
LETTER_POOL[letter] -= 1
else:

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One suggestion - rather than have an else block that skips the append operation on line 39, why not just append within the if block?


def uses_available_letters(word, letter_bank):
pass
new_word=word.upper()

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Careful with the spacing, should have space on either side of the equals sign in Python variable assignments:

new_word = word.upper()

pass
new_word=word.upper()
letter_bank_copy =list(letter_bank)
for letter in new_word:

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This works perfectly well, but could be simplified a bit:

    for letter in word.upper():
        if letter in letter_bank_copy:
            letter_bank_copy.remove(letter)
        else:
            return False


    return True

maximum = scores_dict[scores]
max_key = scores
#Line 111 & 112 doesn't work if there are 3 or more words that are the same length

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Still, this is close and passes the tests. Great job identifying where code can be improved.


# how can I do this using max()?
# I originally had this but didn't how how to break ties according to len() using max().

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You'd probably need some additional conditional logic to make use of max in that way. There are a lot of different ways to accomplish the same solution, you'll see that time and again in programming!

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