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@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ kubectl exec -ti <NAME> -- wget https://github.com/moparisthebest/static-curl/re
 ### Product usage reporting
 
 As of 1.17.9, Vault will collect anonymous product usage metrics for HashiCorp. This information will be collected
-alongside activity information, and will be sent automatically if automated reporting is configured, or added to manual
+alongside client activity data, and will be sent automatically if automated reporting is configured, or added to manual
 reports if manual reporting is preferred.
 
 See the main page for [Vault product usage metrics reporting](/vault/docs/enterprise/license/product-usage-reporting) for