Final Project Review - Forden

[EmilyForden]

Evaluation of final project by XXX

Topic	Excellent	Satisfactory	Needs Work
Coding style	x
Coding strategy	x
Presentation: graphs	x
Presentation: tables	x
Achievement, creativity	x
Ease of access	x

Remarks:

• Elaborate on above, esp. for "needs work."
  This was really wonderful. I would suggest being a bit more descriptive in the graph on Question 3 where you are discussing attention. I was not able to tell from that graph alone what units attention was being measured in. To find that out, I needed to look at your table. If the x-axis had been labeled a bit more carefully I would have known.

You've also done quite a bit of very impressive coding!

• Some specific praise?
  Your overall organization was wonderful and I particularly liked what I learned from Question 2 and the way you presented that data. I could understand that question just by looking at your box plot, which is wonderful.

• Something I learned?
  You did a great job of also explaining your methodology. It feels very robust. I also would have thought that the answer to research question 5 would have been the opposite of what the study showed so that was very surprising.

• Specific constructive criticism?
  Just make sure all your axis are labeled well so that someone can get the full picture from just the graph.

• Something I know and that you, my peer, might like to know because it is relevant to something you struggled with.
  On a more conceptual level, I have struggled with explaining my research to non-experts and I think this might still need more background for individuals not directly in your lab. To overcome this, I often try to put informational paragraphs that at written at a more general level before each of my research questions/statements. This could be helpful for attracting viewers from the field more generally.