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@@ -6,14 +6,14 @@ the current device, get basic information about the user and much more.
 
 ## Transmission Method
 
-It's easy to guess, but in a web environment, one of the simplest and most instantaneous ways to
-transfer data in a local environment is to specify them in the address bar of the application. Thus,
-both the called server and the downloaded application will have some pre-known data. Actually,
-Telegram Mini Apps technology uses the same algorithm.
-
-The native Telegram application transmits a list of these parameters in the dynamic part of the
-URL (in the hash, `#`). Accordingly, in order to access these parameters, it is necessary to access
-the `window.location.hash` property from the JavaScript code.
+In a web environment, one of the simplest and fastest ways to transfer data between locally running 
+applications is by specifying it in the address bar. A server can include data in the URL's hash, 
+making it accessible to the client application. Similarly, Telegram Mini Apps use this approach, with 
+the Telegram client environment sending data to the Mini App through the URL's hash. This enables 
+the Mini App to access essential information upon launch.
+
+The native Telegram application transmits a list of these parameters in the dynamic part of the URL 
+(in the hash #). To access these parameters, you need to use the window.location.hash property in your JavaScript code.
 
 ## Extraction