Better description of attributes in code

[parfa30]

Describe the bug
Not a bug, just a series of recommendations by @dey3434 for better description of attributes throughout the Intro and WhiteDwarf notebooks. code would be easier to understand with more comments and definitions of terms

Comments
Intro Notebook:

• output 84: what is z?

White Dwarfs Notebook:

• In second text box: "We're all familiar with our own sun a seemingly ever present that we see continually day to day"--missing a word
• unnecessary capitalization of "Helium" in third text box
• what are mag. errors?
• what is the y axis for out [12]? is it flux?
• "Given 'standard' stars, those with external distance constraints we can also" missing comma
• explanation of flux needed

[michaelJwilson]

@alxogm We won't get this in for the release tomorrow, but trialing assigning someone to make sure the Spanish is updated in tandem.

@parfa30 If you commit one notebook at a time to your fork, I'll try and keep up. That way we can converge on any style changes before a lot is done.

@dey3434 Feel free to take part! Let us know if you need help with getting started with Git. We do ask that you upload a photo to Git first, if you're going to contribute. Get permission from your parents if you're still a minor!

Thanks!

[michaelJwilson]

I'm curious if @dey3434 is still taking a stab at these / made it to the finish? @parfa30

[dey3434]

Hello! I’m so sorry for the late response. I have not had a chance to work through any more of the notebooks, but I will be on my holiday break starting next week and would be happy to look at some other ones then! Could you remind me what stage this project is at? Do you still need help just going through the notebooks and giving general feedback? Best, Sharmila

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[michaelJwilson]

No problem, that'd be great! We're still in development of the material and transitioning to a Berkeley Extensions course that would have a test and yield college credits. There's still some work to do in forming a semi-complete picture and gauging the right level of difficulty. It'd likely be useful to have a short chat, probably before and after looking at any more notebooks - assuming Arjun etc. is good with that.